This is a short video that tells the story of a group of friends who went kayaking on the shore of England.
Make a comment on the video: did you like it? was it difficult to understand? Write a different ending for the story, or invent some adventures that could have happened to these people before ending their trip. In order to tell the story you must use the simple past and simple continuous tenses. You will have a possitive point on the writing section of the second term this year.
You must have completed this task before Wednesday the 12th.
I like the pictures of the video and the story is easy to understand.
ResponderEliminarEnding of the story: When they were in the cave a gold fish appeared.
The fish said that he would grant three wishes to them.
so the first said that he wanted a car and before he said that a car came in front of them,
the second wanted money and before he said that he was covered with money,
but the last said that he wanted to be happy, because he knew that he wanted something material he couldn't bring it to the beach in their kayaks.
When they finished their wishes the gold fish disappeared and they returned happily to the beach because one of them got his wish.
Remus
I like the video because the landscape's pictures are beautiful and it's easy to understand.
ResponderEliminarEnding of the story: they was snorkelling when one of theirs saw a big and terrible shark, he started to shout and swim toward the kayak.His friends said him that he was crazy because was impossible that there was sharks. Suddenly, they realized that, Mary, the youngest of the group, she was disappeared. Then they started to find her, they were really worried. While they was finding Mary they heart a loud shout, it was the Mary's voice. Five minutes later, John, the Mary's boyfriend found Mary who was in a dark cave, she was observe a little beautiful animal and she had shouted because the little animal had bitten her. Finally, Mary an John came back with the group and they never ever they never ever moved away of the group.
Candela
1.- I like it beacuse is a very little and happy story.
ResponderEliminar2.- It isn't difficult to understand. It's more difficult to understand class listenings.
3.- Different ending:
When they were rowing in the sea, a big wave shook them, and they sank in the water. A few moments later, another wave (bigger than the other) shook the water strongly. The next day, the people awoke in a dark cave, near the beach. They hadn't got any scape, only walking across the cave and the labyrinth of tunnels. They were walking for many hours when one of them saw a little light in front of them. They ran very fast and, when they came out the cave, they saw that they were near their hotel. One of them said very loudly:
IT'S A PRACTICAL JOKE!!!!!!!
Irene
1)COMMENT:
ResponderEliminarI liked it, I think it was easy to understand because it's a short and a nice video.
2)DIFFERENT ENDING:
When they were snorkelling, one of them saw a shiny thing, they didn't know what was that, so they fell to take the brilliant thing.
When they took it, they started to investigate it.
Along the days, when they were investigating, one of them screamed and said: It's an old relic, it's from The Titanic! All of them were very happy with the discovery.
At the next day, they called the TV and the police and they showed them the relic.
The historians said that it was true, so, now, the relic is in a museum.
The End
Andrea Embid
Yes, I like it, it was good.
ResponderEliminarNo, I don't think so. I think it was easy to understand and to follow the story.
THE ENDING:
When they were kayaking on the sea a very big shark appeared unexpectedly. They couldn't see the shark because it appeared behind them. When the saw the shark, inmediatly they started to row fast to the shores of the sea. They were rowing very very fast and they were doing everything they could do, but not enough to escape from the shark. The shark caught them and he was hungry. In only two seconds, they were surrounded by a lot of sharks in the sea, so they couldn't do anything more to save their lives. The sharks started to push them into the water, leaving all the kayaks floating all over the sea. Finally the sharks ate them and they didn't leave any rests from their meal. It was a horrible ending of a nice day in the beach with your friends.
1.Comment: I like the video but I prefer the horror endings.
ResponderEliminar2.Other ending: While the group were kayaking, a person left the group and he got lost. When the group realized that he wasn't there, they tried to look for him but they didn´t find him.They phoned the police. They were looking for him when the police arrived. The police asked the group. The police were looking for a person and after time they found him in a cave near the coast. He was scared and freezing. The group came back and they were happy. They celebrated it.
Héctor
1)I like it because it's an original and short story.
ResponderEliminar2)It wasn't difficult. I understand all story.
3)DIFFERENT ENDING
When they were watching the beautiful dark caves, they heard a howl. Then they went into the cave and they lit their lanterns. At first, they didn't see anything into the cave and a boy thought that a stone had fallen but other girl wasn't thinking this. She thought that an animal was there and suddenly they watched something was moving. ¡It was a puppy! He was very cute and small.
Finally, they caugth the puppy and came back to the hotel with him.
Cris
1.COMMENT
ResponderEliminarI like it, but it´s a little boring.
2.SECOND ENDING.
These friends were in the kayak, but while they were enjoying, suddenly, they saw a strange thing ...A TSUNAMI!They were very scared because it was very dangerous, but one boy wanted to make this adventure even more funny, then, they went to the wave and they surfed it. IT WAS VERY FUNNY!!
1. Comment: I like it. It has been entertaining.
ResponderEliminar2. Ending: Being in the sea they found a shark that attacked them. In the escape, one person fell in sea and the shark ate him. They tried to help him, but it was too late. They tried to kill it, but was very dificult. In the shore, they breathed quiet. They thought that they were going to die. Finally they went home.
1.COMMENT:
ResponderEliminarI like this video because I think it is very interesting and it shows us a fun experience, but this could be better with a tragic end.
2.DIFFERENT ENDING:
When they were snorkelling, they saw something in the distance and one of them thought what was that, so he went near it. All of his friends waited near the kayak. He ran into a rock and he began to bleed, suddenly a shark attacked him. His friends were frightened and they started shouting, a boat came up to them but it was too late to help his friend.