Use at least 12 of these words to do ONE of the following:
a) Make a summary of the book "The Earthquake", which you have just read (max. 200 words).
b) Invent a story about an imaginary earthquake happened in Zaragoza (max. 200 words).
Underline the 12 words while writing. And don't forget to write your name at the end of the composition!
Deadline: 28th January 2013
a) Make a summary of the book "The Earthquake", which you have just read (max. 200 words).
b) Invent a story about an imaginary earthquake happened in Zaragoza (max. 200 words).
Underline the 12 words while writing. And don't forget to write your name at the end of the composition!
Deadline: 28th January 2013
The Earthquake-Raúl Sachelarie-3ºB
ResponderEliminarThe story started with a girl called Silvia. Gabriel and Marco is her friends. Marco likes Silvia but Gabriel too. Marco have more money and expensive things. She goes with Marco to the restaurant. In the restaurant, the earthquake started. Many people dead. In the city was rubble everywhere. She was saved and she went quickly home to find his mother. She needs to found the medicines for her mother. When she came home she realized that thieves went home. She take the medicines and she started to walk to the park. There she found her mother and went to the countryside. Few days after the earthquake Silvia and her mother go home. In her flat, in front of the door, Silvia could see a person. Is Gabriel and he have in his hand he had a red rose, dirty and die red rose. Gabriel had a hurt arm.
Finish.
Present or past??
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The Earthquake:
ResponderEliminarThe story is about a girl called Silvia. She lives with her mother, who is ill. She is in love with Marco, a rich man. Another character is Gabriel, a poor man, who is in love with Silvia. Gabriel go to Silvia`s flat, because he wants to go to the cinema with Silvia. He has a red rose in his hand but Silvia is meeting Marco. Then, Marco appears with twenty red roses. Gabriel is unhappy and he goes to the cinema alone. He is waiting outside the cinema and an earthqueake happens. Silvia and Marco go to the restaurant. When they arrive, Marco argues with a waiter. Silvia is embarrased because everybody is looking at them. She is in the restaurant`s garden, when the earthquake happens. There are many craks on the pavement an many people dead. Silvia has to find her mother. She talks to a neighbour and go to the park. Gabriel is hurt. He has his arm injured. Silvia crosses the city and in the park she finds her mother. The city is still collapse. Marco is safe too, but he didn`t help to other people. The story finished in the Silvia`s flat and Gabriel give her the red rose again.
Paula Valero 3ºB
Mind the mix of verb tenses... but well done!!
EliminarZaragoza’s earthquake
ResponderEliminarThis story happened in Zaragoza, last year. Peter was in the Aljaferia’s park. In this moment Peter saw his new neighbour called Mary. Suddenly he thought in her and took a red rose. Peter had his arm broke because he fell two days ago. Peter went to Mary and he invited her to go to the cinema. Mary was a bit embarrassed, but finally she accepted. On the cinema, at 7:39 p.m. the earthquake happened. After five minutes the cinema was destroyed. They crossed Spanish’s square very quickly. Mary was only injured, but Peter was hurt, very hurt. They looked at cinema, and it was in rubble. When they were going to the hospital one building fell on them. Mary said “we are collapsed, we can’t leave it”. After ten minutes they were died. Finally, one man pushed the rubble and looked at them, “oh, no”, the man said, “They are dead”.
Pablo Íñigo Rabinal
3ºB E.S.O.
Good work!!
EliminarThe history is about a girl called Marie, she lived in Zaragoza, and she loves Mario.
ResponderEliminarMario was her friend and he didn’t know he liked, he was her neighbour. The first of January they meet and went to the cinema, and watch a film called The Park green. Then they went to dinner at a restaurant, they sat at a table near the window. When they were having dinner, cups and plates began to move, the people shouted in this moment the earthquake happened. Mario ran out the broken window, Marie stayed quiet. When the earthquake finished, Mario look for Marie. The restaurant was a ruin and there were rubbles. Mario saw his arm hurt but he doesn’t worry. He saw a Marie under the rubbles. She was dead. After ten years, Mario remembers a Marie, he goes to the cemetery and put on a red rose every day.
Cristina Vallés. 3ºB
Present or past??... Pay attention!!
EliminarThis story started with one girl called Silvia. She loves Marco but Gabriel too. Marco has a lot of money and expensive things. The father of Silvia is dead and her mother was ill, she needs expensive medicines. Marco goes the Oasis Restaurant with Silvia it’s the best restaurant in town. It was 8.27 p.m the earthquake happened. Silvia didn’t move. Silvia tied to get out of the garden the restaurant into the street, she started walk and had her feet hurt. She had gone home helps her mother. Silvia goes at home but doesn’t found her mother. Silvia found a neighbor called Mr. Enriques. He doesn’t about her mother. Gabriel went the cinema and the earthquake happened, some rubble hit him on the head. It’s a broken arm. Then Gabriel goes at home of Silvia help her mother but found the thieves. Silvia arrived at Liberty Park and is a neighbor and tells him where his mother. The Garcias take her and her mother at home. Silvia arrived at the door the home saw Gabriel. He had in hand one dirty, dead, red rose.
ResponderEliminarJosselyne Tigasi 3ºA
There are several mistakes: mix of present and past tenses, vocabulary, prepositions...
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The Earthquake,
ResponderEliminarIn the story the protagonist is Silvia, Silvia is a girl that lives with her mother, she loves Marco, but there is another man, Gabriel, he loves Silvia. One day Silvia met with Marco, they went to an expensive restaurant, when they were in the restaurant the earthquake happened. Silvia was out of it, she saw the rubbles of the restaurant. In this moment Silvia thought in her mother, she went to the town to stay with her, when she arrived at home her mother didn´t was there, one neighbour said her, that her mother was in Liberty Park, she went look for. She remembered Gabriel, he went to the cinema when the earthquake happened… Gabriel had hurt his arm, he was injured, and he was worried for Silvia and her mother, he went to the flat and he stayed there protecting it. Silvia found her mother in the park and they back to the city. When they arrived to the flat, first went up Silvia, she found one man in the floor, he was Gabriel, he had the red rose in his hand, and he gave it her. Silvia was in love of Gabriel, didn’t of Marco.
Ana Pérez-3ºB
Present or past?? also, there are some grammar mistakes...
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b) An earthquake in Zaragoza:
ResponderEliminarThis story is about a girl called Amy, she lives in Zaragoza, and she’s in love with a boy called Jason, her best friend.
A day like all others, Jason and Amy were to walk around Independencia Street. As they passed by The Palafox, they saw that premiered "The red rose" and they went to see her. When they left, four thieves were stealing the cinema box office. Amy, frightened, wanted out of there but suddenly the ground began to move. An earthquake. And the ground moved again, louder, and more and more.
Everything began to collapse, the eyes of Amy and Jason met. They tried to get to safety, but they could only watch as everyone screamed and ran, as the roof and people were falling. Suddenly, something hit Amy in her arm and she fainted.
Ambulance sirens, Amy could barely open my eyes, what little he could see were the rubble. "Where's Jason?" he wondered. Fell again.
She awoke in a hospital, her arm hurts, but..Where was he?
He got up from the hospital bed and went to look for him.
The nurses went to stop her, they said her that she wouldn't wanted to saw him in this moment.
They achieved only worry her. Entered.
And there it was, on the hospital bed, sleeping.
A smile was drawing in her face.
But the nurses had a smile inverted.
Why?
Wait ...
No. No. No way. No. You can not be dead.
He's dead.
Elena de Pablo 3ºA ESO.
Good story!! you are very creative, though a bit negative... aren't you?? But there are some grammar mistakes... Pay attention!!
EliminarGabriel went to the Silvia’s flat He went with a RED ROSE to her and he had bought tickets to go to the CINEMA, so he decided to invite her to go there. So, Gabriel went out without her, but went he was going out, he saw that she was going out with Marco. He saw that she really didn’t LOVE him Then, he went to CINEMA alone, he was standing in line without the cinema when the EARTHQUAKE happened. While he was there, Silvia and Marco went to the Oasis Restaurant this restaurant was the best site to have a romantic dinner there Marco wanted a table next to the centre because he wanted to dance after dinner. All tables were reserved, but Marco still wanted under a table for two there. So, he argued with the waiter. In that moment, Silvia went out of the RESTAURANT t and went to the garden, then the EARTHQUAKE happened.All buildings were broken, and the restaurant, too. Marco was in the restaurant, but it was too late.. So, Silvia decided to go to the flat, because her mother was there, and she was ill. She thought in Gabriel for a moment, because she knew that he was in the cinema, but anyway, she thought in her mother. She went to the flat, but she didn’t find her mother, so she talked with her neighbour, ‘Mr, García’, and he said her that her mother was in the PARK, without the city, and she could go there because the other neighbourRs led her. Gabriel was standing in line without the CINEMA, to go in, when the earthquake happened and the cinema and all buildings were broken, Later, Silvia talked with a man, and he told her that Marco wasn’t dead, but in that moment she understood that she really didn’t LOVE him.After a while, she walked to the PARk, but when she came she didn’t find her. For about an hour after she found her mother. At the same moment, Gabriel was in the flat and saw the ROSE in the floor, and he slept there. A few time later, the earthquake stopped, and all people came back to them houses. The Delgado’s came back to them home, and found Gabriel in the flat.
ResponderEliminarVianka Guido 3ºB ESO
Too long...
EliminarYou have not written this on your own. Any help?? Translator maybe??
The book is about an EARTHQUAKE.It happened in a city in England.Silvia was going to the CINEMA with Gabriel but lately she went with Marco to a restaurant.While they were having dinner,an earthquake started.Everything was falling down(tables,glasses,and even the walls and the roof).Many people were DEAD in the street.Gabriel was outside the cinema.He was watching a lot of RUBBLE from the houses.Silvia lost Marco and "the POOR Silvia" have to go alone to look for her mother's medicines. First, she went to the house but Mrs Delgado wasn't there,so he went to the PARK.There, she found Mr Garcia and her mother who was lying on the floor.Gabriel had HURT his ARM and he went to Silvia's flat and found two THIEVES. When he went up the stairs, he saw the ROSE. Silvia and her mother wanted to go back home by car with a NEIGHBOURG. Everything in the street was COLLAPSED but they got to arrived home.When they arrived, Silvia saw Gabriel and she realized she was in LOVE whit him, no with Marco.
ResponderEliminarCynthia Lafuente, 3ºB ESO
Good summary! There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes... but well done!!
EliminarThe earthquake is a love story, in that story Marco and Gabriel love Silvia, Marco is rich but is a bad man. Gabriel is a good person but he’s poor. Silvia lives with her mother, she is ill, when her father lived the Delgado’s had a lot of money, but at the moment they aren’t very rich because her mother is very ill and she needs medicines. One afternoon Silvia and Marco went to the restaurant, when they arrived at the restaurant Silvia went to the garden, and in this moment the earthquake happened. When the earthquake happened Marco was in the cinema, after the earthquake he was injured, he hurt his back and broken his arm. He went to the Silvia’s flat, and he looks for a thieves.
ResponderEliminarAfter the earthquake Silvia came back to her flat, and she looks for her mother, but she doesn’t found her. In the street Silvia met whit her neighbor, Mr. Garcia. She spoke with him. Silvia found her mother in a country, and she went to her flat with her mother. In the door of her flat she saw at Gabriel, he gives her a red rose.
Marco wasn’t dead; he’s safe because other man helped his. But he only looks for his car. Silvia doesn’t like Marco, she loves Gabriel.
Andrea,3ºA.
Present or past?? Also there are grammar mistakes... pay attention!!
EliminarGabriel, a young man, and Silvia would get, but Silvia didn’t remember this and get out with Marco, a rich bad man. They went to a restaurant and Gabriel went to a park and to the cinema alone. When Silvia and Marco were in the restaurant, was a earthquake. Silvia was safe but she was worried about her mother and she went to her flat and changed her shoes. Gabriel went to Silvia’s flat and saw the shoes, he was quiet now, but two thieves get out to the flat. Gabriel is a injured arm so he stayed on the flat. Silvia looked her mother, had rubble in the street so, she looked her mother on the country and she found her. They went to her house with a neighbor. Silvia saw Gabriel and the red rose. Gabriel is hurt but he didn’t thing about this. Silvia love Gabriel, not Marco.
ResponderEliminarAlicia Lázaro 3ºB
Grammar and vocabulary mistakes... Decide if you want to write in the present or in the past... Keep working!
EliminarThe history is about an earthquake. Gabriel is a good man. He loves Silvia but she loves Marco. Marco is bad man and wear expensive clothes. Silvia lives with her mother. Her mother was ill. On evening Silvia went with Marco to the Oasis restaurant. When they were in the restaurant happened the earthquake and Gabriel was in the cinema. Silvia want find her mother and went at house. When arrived there was nobody. Gabriel hurt the arm and the head. Gabriel went Silvia’s home for know new of Silvia. In the street saw a children and played with him. When arrived Silvia’s house there were a thieves but saw Gabriel and ran. Silvia saw a neighbours and say where stay her mother. Silvia go to the Liberty park and find her mother. When go at house with mr Garcia and arrived there aren’t a white cross in the door. Silvia ran up the stairs and saw Gabriel with a red rose and she caught the rose.
ResponderEliminarEsther Sangüesa 3ºB
Present or past?? Make a decission!! There are grammar mistakes, and don't forget to write a subject for each verb... Keep working!!
EliminarIt was a Sunday evening. Silvia went to a restaurant with Marco. In the restaurant they gave them a table that they didn't like. When Silvia was going to the toilet the EARTHQUEAKE started. She went out to the street. The street was COLLAPSED and there was RUBBLE. She went back her house, because her mother was ill and she needed medicines, but there was nobody. She went out to the street, she saw her NEIGBOURG, Mr Enriques, and she found a her mother in the Liberty PARK. Gabriel was outside the CINEMA when the erthquake started. A rubble hit him and his ARM was broken and HURT terribly. Many people were DEAD.Gabriel went to the delgados' flat. When he arrived, he saw two THIEVES running out of sittin-room. He drank some milk and helped some workers and gave some food a little boy. When the earthqueake finished, Silvia and her mother went back at her flat. Silvia saw Gabriel, he gave a ROSE RED to her. Silvia loves Gabriel.
ResponderEliminarLaura Correas 3ºA
Not bad!! though there are some vocabulary, grammar and spelling mistakes...
EliminarOn August 22 my friends were to go to the cinema for the birthday of John. At 5 pm we were all in the park next to the square. I wore a red dress and pink. We all started walking towards the cinema, then John gave him a rose to Mary and Mary kissed. Before buying tickets went for a drink.Then went to the box office and buy tickets. We walked across the street and we were waiting in a bank until the movie started. After leaving the cinema we would go to a restaurant. I love this restaurant. Suddenly the ground started shaking very strong and all the buildings were demolished. There had been an earthquake. In the city of Zaragoza only saw rubble. We were all very scared. My arm was injured because I had fallen debris. We begin to walk and cross the street. Suddenly I heard a woman mourn, I turned and saw a dead man. I sat on the floor I'm dizzy. My friends told me to sleep. I fell asleep, but I woke up suddenly. I was in my room, had all been a dream.
ResponderEliminarNuria Martínez Moreno.
Good effort!! but there are some grammar and vocabulary mistakes... Keep working!!
EliminarThe Earthquake:
ResponderEliminarSummary of the book:
The story is in a city with Gabriel, he go to the Silvia's flat but she go to Marco, Gabriel leave to direction a cinema Plaza. Silvia go to Marco a the restaurant Oasis, Marco is a man rich. Marco angrily with the manager and Silvia leave to the washroom, suddenly the earthquake happened. Silvia leave to the restaurant because is a ruin and go to rescue your old mother but Mrs Delgado is not in her bed. A neighbour said Silvia Mr Garcia go with your mother to liberty park . Silvia caught a some medicines and go to the liberty park. Gabriel stay out of the cinema when the earthquake happened and the rubbles hit in his head. When she estand up she go to help Mrs Delgado but the arm are veri bad and he sleep. He stand up and hi is out of the hospital he have a broken arm but he leave the hospital and go to Delgado`s flat and stay Iin her. Silvia found your mother in the liberty park and stay in her 3 days. later they leave the park and go to the hause, Silvia go up the stairs and saw Gabriel on the floor. Pedro Gonzalez 3ºB
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ResponderEliminarMiriam go to the cinema with Veronica, they are in the Pso. Independencia. But thing happened, the ground moves, first nobody felt but later the moves are very strongest and the people started to cry and run very fast, the buildings fell and many people are dead, Zaragoza is a ruin in this moment, Miriam started to cry because your family stay in the Corte ingles of Independencia, this building is a pure ruin ands rubbles. The family of veronica stays in Puerto Venecia. They go to plaza del Pilar this building is good but are very people inside of the basilica del Pilar. They run to river, in her the cars is inside the river. Miriam and Veronica go to Almozara by the bridge but the bridge broken with they on and they fell to the water, this river is a watery grave. The family of Veronica are died because the epicenter of the earthquake is in Puerto Venecia. Pedro Gonzalez3ºB
Too many grammar and vocabulary mistakes... Work harder!!
EliminarThe Earthquake
ResponderEliminarGabriel, a poor guy, went to Silvia’s flat with a red rose and two tickets for the cinema, but Silvia had another plans. She went to the Oasis Restaurant with Marco, a rich friend.
Gabriel went to the cinema anyway, he was outside when the earthquake happened. When the earthquake began while Silvia was in the garden going to the bathroom and Marco argued with the manager.
Silvia was safe so she came back to her flat. She wanted to look for her mother.
Some men took Marco away from the restaurant’s rubble.
When Silvia came back home, her mother wasn’t there. A neighbour had taken her to the park. Silvia took her mother’s medicines and some clothes and went to the park.
Gabriel had a hurt arm but he was worried about Silvia so he went to her flat. There he found two thieves, so he stayed in front of Silvia’s door.
Silvia met her mother and neighbours at the park. When it was safe, they came back home.
When Silvia arrived home she found Gabriel and she realize she loves him.
Raquel Azagra 3º A E.S.O.
Well done!!
EliminarA)Gabriel likes Silvia. He went to the Silvia’s flat, there was a RED ROSE for her, and he invited her to the CINEMA. But she didn't remember and she went to dinner with Marco to dinner at a RESTAURANT. Their table was near the door to the kitchen. Marco did not like the table. While Marco and the manager were discussing, Silvia went to the washroom. The washroom was outside the restaurant. And at that minute, the EARTHQUARE happened.The walls opened. It was only RUBBLE. She had to go home to help his mother. But her mother was not home. She thought her mother was DEAD.
ResponderEliminarSilvia saw a NEIGHBOUR . Mr.Enriques, he told her his mother was in the PARK.
Gabriel was very hurt; he had a broken ARM and a cut on his head. But he like help Silvia’s mother.
When he was in the Silvia’s flat, thieves came. But they could not take anything. Silvia found her mother in the park with Mr. Garcia and his wife. Mr. Garcia had a radio in his car and they heard, they could enter the buildings where there wasn’t a white CROSS. In the Silvia’s flat wasn’t a cross. Silvia up the stairs, and at the door saw Gabriel, was HURT. She understood, she likes Gabriel.
Carolina Carmona .3ºA
There are some mistakes, but it's not that bad... keep working!!
EliminarThe Eartquake
ResponderEliminarGabriel loves Silvia, but she doesn’t love him. Gabriel go to Silvia’s flat for go out with Silvia and go to the cinema, but Marco have expensive clothes and more money than Gabriel. She’s go out with Marco, and they are going to a restaurant, but in that moment the earthquake it’s happened. Before the earthquake, Gabriel is the park, he is walking only and he is seeing a lot of people, when he is in the cinema the earthquake it’s happened. Silvia goes down the street and she’s seeing a lot of people who they are very hurt, also Silvia wants find his mother because her mother isn’t in her flat and she takes some medicines for gives her. While Gabriel goes to the Silvia’s flat for find to Silvia and her mother, but they aren’t there. Gabriel’s arm hurt terribly, he saw a workers and he worked with they. He back to Silvia’s flat for find again to Silvia and her mother and in the flat he take their rose. Silvia saw Gabriel and she thinks that Silvia’s loves Gabriel.
David 3º E.S.O A
You've got problems with tenses and some grammar points... pay attention!!
EliminarThe earthquake
ResponderEliminarThe story starts with silvia and his two friends Marco and Gabriel, Gabriel loves Silvia and she gabriel too but she doesn`t know. Gabriel wants to go to the cinema with Silvia but she meets with Marco a rich man with expensive clothes and things. When she`s on the Oasis restaurant with Marco, suddendly the earthquake happened. She was on the garden when the earthquake happened, but Marco is in the restaurant. After the earthquake there are a lot of rubbles and the buildings fell. A lor of people were dead. She was very worried for her mother and she wants to go with his mother, but she isn`t in his home. She met for surprise with a neighbour and he sais that her mother goes with Mr. Garcia.
Marco in the time f the earthquake isn´t inside of the cinema but the rubbles broken his arm and cuts her heat, this hurts a lot to Gabriel. Silvia went to liberty park to look for his mother and she found her. They went to his house and his door was Gabriel with a red rose for silvia.
PABLO C. 3ºA
Present or past?? Keep working!!
EliminarSilvia Delgado lives with her mother in a flat. Silvia’s mum was ill and the Silvia’s father was DEAD. The Delgados was a rich family but they weren’t a rich family now. Silvia is in LOVE of Gabriel, he is a kind man, but she likes Marco too because he is a rich man and he had expensive things. Gabriel had two tickets for a film and he want goes with Silvia because he is in love of she. He went to the Silvia’s flat and he bring her a RED ROSE but Silvia was going out with Marco so Gabriel went to the CINEMA without Silvia. Marco took Silvia at a RESTAURANT. While they were in the restaurant, the EARTHQUAKE happened. The walls opened and it was only RUBBLE. Silvia was worried about her mother because she’s alone and ill so Silvia went to the flat to look for her. When Silvia arrived at home, her mother wasn’t there and Silvia thought she’s dead. Silvia went out to look for her. In the street, Silvia saw a NEIGHBOUR, Mr. Enrique. He told Silvia that her mother is in a PARK. Silvia went to the park outside in the town to look for her mother. She was tired and HURT but she didn’t think about that. When Silvia arrived to the park, she saw a lot of people, they were looking for their families too. Then, Silvia found her mother; she was with neighbours there. Gabriel went to the Silvia’s flat to help to Msr. Delgado but he only found THIEVES there so he stayed in the flat in case the thieves returned. A man in the park told Silvia that Marco was well and Silvia was happy for this. Silvia went to home with her mother and they found Gabriel in the door of the flat and Silvia understood that she is in love of him.
ResponderEliminarMayerlin Cardona, 3ºB
Too long, but good work!!
EliminarThe book deals with an EARTHQUAKE,
ResponderEliminarGabriel went to Silvia’s flat with a RED ROSE in his hand. Silvia had an ill mother, called Mrs Delgado. They were going to the CINEMA, but when he arrived there, Silvia was going out with Marco. So Gabriel was angry and he went to the cinema alone.
Silvia went to have dinner with Marco at Oasis RESTAURANT.
When the earthquake happened, Gabriel was out the cinema and Silvia was going to the Oasis Restaurant’s washroom, that was outside, in the garden.
Gabriel fell to the ground and when he opened his eyes, his ARM HURT terrible. He wanted to found Silvia and her mother.
At the same time, Silvia was safe, but there were a lot DEAD people under the RUBBLES. Marco was into the restaurant, so she thought he could be dead, so she didn’t want to think about him. She wanted to go home and check that her mother was OK.
When she arrived at home, her mother wasn’t there. Somebody carried her to another place. So, she changed her evening shoes and put into a big bag her mother’s medicines.
She went out the building and she asked a NEIGBOUR if he had seen her mother. The neighbour told her that Mr. Garcia carried her mother to Liberty PARK. She spent a lot time on finding her mother.
At the same time, Gabriel went to Silvia’s flat to safe Mrs. Delgado and hears news about Silvia.
When Gabriel arrived there, there were only two THIEVES, but he could stopped them and safe the things that they had stolen.
He wanted to help the people who were working in the rubbles, but didn’t let him to do it, because his arm was broken. But Gabriel stayed there, and took drinks to the workers.
One day, when Silvia and her mother were coming back to their home, Silvia saw a man sleeping at the door, he was Gabriel, he woke up and he told Silvia that he LOVED her. Silvia loved her too.
The End.
Pilar 3ºA E.S.O
There are a few mistakes and it is too long, but... well done!!
EliminarThe past year, during the Christmas, I went with my family to eat crêpes at a crêperie restaurant called “La Flor" and after we finished, we went to see a movie to the cinema, and then we went for home. But when we were out of the cinema, we felt tremors in the ground and we started to run through the park where we were crossing to go home. These tremors were bigger every time, I said - It's an earthquake!!! We had not choice so we protected under a table that was in the little park by which we were crossing, while we were under the table, saw rubbles falling from house. Soon, when we saw that all were calmed we go out from under the table where we were hidden and started to walk to our house but suddenly something happened, unexpected, I tripped over a stone and my arm was hooked inside the rubble. My brother helped me pull the arm and we followed walking to home.
ResponderEliminar2 hours later, when we coming at home, we saw to our neighbour who looked like a poor beggar due to the earthquake. We help to him, while near there saw thieves stealing a bank and decided to go unnoticed but following our road to home. We saw a lot of dead people crushed by rubble, the street was collapsed with a lot of police cars and followed by another street but had to stop because I had hurt my arm that I had been caught in the rubble and my father who knows some First Aid healed me. We arrived home and we switched on the TV and saw that it was a very big earthquake and that there had been many deaths but this situation so embarrassed was finished.
Raúl Abad Torralba 3º A ESO.
There are some grammar mistakes and it's a bit too long. Keep working!!
EliminarSilvia loves Gabriel, but she's not sure because she may love Marco, another guy that loves her. One night, Gabriel goes to Silvia's flat to take her to the cinema, but she won't go whit him. She will go whit Marco to a restaurant. Gabriel goes to the cinema alone, but he stayed in a park near the cinema. When the earthquake happens, Silvia were out of the restaurant in the garden, so she's safe, but hurt, because a lot of building transform into rubble. Silvia thought about her poor mother, she may be dead, so she had to look for her. When she arrived at her flat, her mother weren't there, but he saw a neighbour and asked him. He said that Mr. Garcia took her to Liberty Park. Gabriel got injured in the park, he broke his arm and he fell asleep. Later, he awoke out of an hospital, but he wanted to help Silvia and her mother. When he arrived at their flat, he stopped some thieves and helped people in the street. Silvia arrived at Liberty Park and found her mother. She asked for Marco, he was safe, but he was oly worried about his car. Silvia understood that she loves Gabriel. When there was no warning of earthquakes, they went back home. The radio said that the doors of the flats whit white cross are unsafe, the rest are safe. Silvia's flat didn't have that cross. When she arrived, she found Gabriel lying in the floor whit their red rose in his hand.
ResponderEliminarAlberto 3ºA ESO
A bit too long, but good work!!
EliminarGabriel went Delgado´s doors. He wanted go with Silvia but Silvia met with Marco. Marco drove his car to the Oasis restaurant. In the restaurant Marco wanted a table near the dance. Silvia went outside of the restaurant when the earthquake happened. Silvia went to her flat for pick up her mother. Her mother is with Mr Garcia in Liberty Park. There she heard her name and is Mr Garcia, he arrived she to her mother. The third day the radio said the earthquake finish.
ResponderEliminarMr Garcia drove his car to Delgado´s flat and in her door is Gabriel, and she said I love you to Gabriel.
Gabriel went to the Plaza and there he didn´t know do with his ticket and the earthquake happened.
He can walked and he go to Silvia´s flat. There he drink milk and waited for came Silvia. When Silvia came he heard of Silvia mouth I love you.
Juan, you need to pay attention when you write. There are grammar mistakes I'm sure you can recognize...think!!
EliminarSilvia is a young girl who lives with her mother, who is ill.
ResponderEliminarGabriel loved Silvia and he wanted to go to the cinema with she, but she had forgotten, and now he go to a expensive restaurant with Marco. Gabriel gets angry and throws a red rose to the ground.
When they were in the restaurant the earthquake happened.
Silvia was very scared and going search of his mother. she goes to the building but can’t find she. His neighbor says that his mother is in the park, she will find her mother there.
Gabriel decides to go look for Silvia, but the only thing is are two thieves. He had his arm broken, but wants to help lift rubbles.
Silvia found her mother in the park. They wanted to go home, but they didn’t know if their building was safe. when they arrived they didn't saw the cross.
Gabriel was there waiting for sher, he was injured, and was holding the rose.
Kelly Marquez 3º B ESO
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ResponderEliminarEl terrible terremoto de Zaragoza:
ResponderEliminarUn bonito día de verano. Yo iba con mis amigos al centro el actur. Nosotros íbamos a comprar una rosa roja para la novia de uno de nosotros. Cuando estábamos pagando de repente hubo un temblor espantoso toda la gente corría hacia las calles la gente estaba confundida ya que a donde ir entonces a David se le callo un banco en la pierna se había roto la pierda que hacemos decíamos cuando se me ocurrió que al lado de donde habíamos comprado la rosa había una tienda de sillas de ruedas pablo y yo fuimos a la tienda mientras pedro se quedaba con el volvimos a toda prisa nosotros decidimos volver a nuestras casa haber como estaban nuestras familias pero los puentes estaban derrumbados teníamos que encontrar un bote y lo encontramos fuimos todo lo rápido que pudimos atravesando el rió casi nos hundimos pero lo conseguimos nuestras familias estaban bien gracias a dios.
No lo he podido enviar antes ya que el Internet nos lo habían dado de baja te lo he enviado lo antes posible lo siento. Adrián 3a
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